Review Detail of RoKo505 in First To Reincarnate
Review detail
I’m going to do a little self review as I’d like to at least have one review here. I hope I’m being fair to myself. Hope I’m being a little harsh. I think the grammar and writing structure could use some work even though I haven’t seen any major flaws. I believe the premise is good and the story is unique. However, I should be careful about the story pacing. There’s potential but only if done correctly. Hope you do well and continue to update. It would be great if you could update more often but I understand if you can’t. [img=Speechless] Overall I would say it’s enjoyable and readable as a novel.
First To Reincarnate
RoKo505
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If you're talking about the beginning, he wanted to die yes. But that was because of the painful life he had and the cards he was dealt. He could have still tried to run away but he probably still would have died. For him who had nothing, there was no reason to try and live. But if he was given a completely new life, one much better than his last, I don’t know anyone who wouldn’t jump at the chance to be happy again. But that’s just my opinion. Thank you very much for reading!
Jack_Priper:I'm curious. what's with the "i want to die" turning into: "I'm alive?! okay then. live i shall! and I'll do a good job of it too!!!"