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MrCarpfish
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2024-04-20 13:23

I suppose it has potential, the writing is adequate . The problem arise from Webnovel's usual popularity rankings. You'do have to pumped out chaps regardless of its word count if you want get your work recognized. *sigh* that's why the rankings are full horrendous cliched trashes

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Anyways I just started reading hopefully it goes well.

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