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Helia_King
Helia_KingLv410mth
2024-02-20 23:47

I like the it and all it needs is for the grammar to be worked on

Ultimate Herrsher in DxD

Shonpufi
4.2
96 Chs

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Helia_King
Helia_KingLv4

I hate autocorrect

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Grafian
GrafianLv14

It doesn't paint a particularly good picture if the author can't even spell 'Herrscher' correctly, when that's the entire focus of the premise.

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Helia_King
Helia_KingLv4

From what I can tell English isn’t the authors first language and the word herrscher isn’t even an english word. But the fact that your saying that the entire fanfic might be bad because of a single word being incorrect is just stupid. The fanfic is good with the only problem being grammar. I honestly don’t even know why you replied to my comment with something so stupid.

Grafian:It doesn't paint a particularly good picture if the author can't even spell 'Herrscher' correctly, when that's the entire focus of the premise.
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