Review Detail of ChineseChung in Spider-Man X.

To let others know I only got to chapter 20 or the beginning of volume 2 so take this as you will. Writing Quality: Perfectly understandable and legible unlike most fic on this site. Updates: regularly and without significant gaps. Story: The story overall is filled with inconsistencies and added plot armor at times just to make the MC more competent than he really is. The MC gets bitten by a spider but instantly gets a power up and after the initial conflict is over he collapses from the bite and has the classic Spider-Man transformation growing 2 inches. The MC also goes to the wreckage of Steve Trevor for some reason and saves him…? He had no reason to save Steve as from the looks of the plane he can get some basic info of which version of DC he is in with the plane being outdated from his time leading to the assumption that he is in the past no need to expose himself to Steve for an unneeded conversation. Character: not my cup of tea, he has hero syndrome and constantly contradicts himself. He was said to be a man of his word but goes back on it The author added a whole persona shift that doesn’t really sink in. He was a villain an assassin who got transmigrated into DC and now he has a hero complex? He is supposed to be this badass assassin but fall short in multiple categories from prideful and slow witted to an overall contradicting character. He try’s to rely too much on others and gets himself stuck in bad situations. Another thing I didn’t care for much was how the author to pass of his ‘heroic’ traits just said that miles morales template was affecting him more than he thought. If the MC was so badass before the transmigration he would notice the changes in himself almost immediately. Thankfully I can say the one thing he isn’t is bland, so other opinions may vary. World: Nothing new to DC and overall all good if slightly average. Decent enough concept and average execution, overall I’d say give it a read or at least the first couple of chapters to see if you like it or not and hopefully the authors sees this because my message to him is good job and keep it up because while this story doesn’t align with my taste it’s at least something and you tried which is a lot better then most can say.