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Review Detail of Gutterstomp in Gacha No Life (Fan-Fic)

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Gutterstomp
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It’s been 20 chapters and zero gacha. The grammar and the the amount of chapters is great but that is about it. The story pacing is non existent, each chapter feels like a one shot story with the Mc just getting dragged around and getting involved in cliche situations where the system always comes to the rescue with a “emergency situation bs” the story title might as well be emergency assimilation system. The depths of the gag mc’s character is around the same as a puddle. The story is slightly entertaining but don’t expect a deep, immersive and interesting plot.

Gacha No Life (Fan-Fic)

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You know what? I kinda realized that while I was doing it, but that's mostly because I can't really be consistent to save my life. My story changes with my mood, meaning that I could be feeling dragons one second and heroes the next, and that shows within my writing. It's been quite the learning experience! Thanks for the review though! 💜