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Author: Ritesh_Jha_1696

Ritesh_Jha_1696Lv41yr

2024-03-06 16:40

bro I read like 10-15 chapters and story and character development are going pretty good it made me hooked to the story l the only fault I could find in this story is grammatical mistakes which is holding this story back but it cand be improved and if you fix some errors here and there it will make the story mor entertaining without having correcting mistakes ourselves when reading. Good work and thank you for translation 😊 👍🏻

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GreyKnightsLv14

Really that all what about the fact that Strucker was supposed to be dead during avengers age of Ultron

1yr

Ritesh_Jha_1696Lv4

well we can chalk it to like its's alternate universe

1yr

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JapaOuOLv4

This story is very good, the idea is creative and it is super well written! and oddly enough I didn't find any flaws or holes in the script! so this story has been a wonderful experience!.... one question who will be the romantic partner?

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ZenaxsLv1

Thanks for the quality work. I really enjoyed many aspects of the book, especially the main character. Also, I'm looking forward to seeing his interactions with the characters MCU 🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏

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ReaderCatLv2

I barely read 10 chapters. if you like reading meaningless, filler dialogs and repetitive explanations, go ahead. I am stopping reading. I am waiting for a healthy critique from those who continue. let me know if the following chapters are worth reading.

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Ashish_Kumar_1835Lv4

The translation and grammar is the biggest thing that is holding this story back. also the pandering of the mc can be lowered to make it more authentic .

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MurodLv3

this history has potential , continue !! i reading your two os histories [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

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Very good story. [img=recomendar][img=recomendar][img=recomendar][img=recomendar][img=recomendar][img=recomendar][img=recomendar][img=recomendar][img=recomendar]

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GreyKnightsLv14

This has to be au because Lord Barron, Strucker dies during the movie avengers age of Ultron, so this has to be in alternative universe

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ElvishYadavLv1

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Its a very interesting novel and a good read [img=update][img=update]

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one of my favorite fanfic , so please don't drop

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