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2024-10-23 16:41

as i read the reviews its pretty good and I'm gonna give it 5star i will read it if got 500 chapters keep up the good work author 🥰

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Author I was enjoying the story but then there are some problems 1. MC is an idiot. You say he is smart, can sense negative intent, or people who have bad feelings but all along the emperor, jim, rain ...these people were out to screw him over but what did he do? be cautious nope. Took a potion from someone and drank without any worries. He even sensed the emperor didnt like him so why didnt he trust his intuition 2. He has been poisoned once but he literally drank something and got roofied from a potion again. He doesnt trust Athena so why not be cautious. It just seems so stupid. You would think he would be cautious at this point but 3. I mean the way you are making his harem is so weird. I mean you give us such a wholesome happy marriage feel with Liliana and the kids ....makes you feel like he doesnt need harem then bam he gets roofed and r*ped by dragon empress. I mean thats a effed up way to introduce harem members. If he pursued them his self and took on members it would be better but like this its kind of effed up. 4. I wish you had introduced some lifespan increases with power etc. I mean since demons, dragons elves etc live so long and humans lifespan is probably a 100 at most or so. I was hoping it said he has chance to become God realm so maybe can be immortal and then help the harem members, kids etc be immortal too possibly 5. MC is annoying. I mean he said he would get revenge on emperor, the prime minister, rain etc but eventhough rain is the one who poisoned him he is probably her childhood crush. Let me guess he will forgive her when he finds out? I mean its so stupid since he really wouldve died if not for a coincidence due to her poison. He just seems like too much of a idealistic Like he didnt want to get angry at Dragon empress because he needs their support He is constantly being pushed around by people and lead around. He is stronger then her but he is scared since she tried to r*pe him. Well then if he is then why did he like an idiot send Liliana out of meeting and got roofied, kidnapped and r*ped. I mean you say all this about Mc being smart but isnt he an idiot. I mean nothing needs to be hidden from Liliana, but he sends her out. It makes no sense he makes such stupid decisions when you know the other person is crazy, tried to r*pe you in the past and what they have done in the past yet you get surprised when they do same thing again? just few words and you start getting tricked its absurd

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