webnovel
Nadare17
Nadare17Lv48mth
2024-03-11 01:44

πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘[img=update][img=update]πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘

Liked by 2 people

LIKE
empty img

No replies. Be the first!

Other Reviews
DaoistD1ToKX
DaoistD1ToKXLv14
MangaisLife1
MangaisLife1Lv2

Author I was enjoying the story but then there are some problems 1. MC is an idiot. You say he is smart, can sense negative intent, or people who have bad feelings but all along the emperor, jim, rain ...these people were out to screw him over but what did he do? be cautious nope. Took a potion from someone and drank without any worries. He even sensed the emperor didnt like him so why didnt he trust his intuition 2. He has been poisoned once but he literally drank something and got roofied from a potion again. He doesnt trust Athena so why not be cautious. It just seems so stupid. You would think he would be cautious at this point but 3. I mean the way you are making his harem is so weird. I mean you give us such a wholesome happy marriage feel with Liliana and the kids ....makes you feel like he doesnt need harem then bam he gets roofed and r*ped by dragon empress. I mean thats a effed up way to introduce harem members. If he pursued them his self and took on members it would be better but like this its kind of effed up. 4. I wish you had introduced some lifespan increases with power etc. I mean since demons, dragons elves etc live so long and humans lifespan is probably a 100 at most or so. I was hoping it said he has chance to become God realm so maybe can be immortal and then help the harem members, kids etc be immortal too possibly 5. MC is annoying. I mean he said he would get revenge on emperor, the prime minister, rain etc but eventhough rain is the one who poisoned him he is probably her childhood crush. Let me guess he will forgive her when he finds out? I mean its so stupid since he really wouldve died if not for a coincidence due to her poison. He just seems like too much of a idealistic Like he didnt want to get angry at Dragon empress because he needs their support He is constantly being pushed around by people and lead around. He is stronger then her but he is scared since she tried to r*pe him. Well then if he is then why did he like an idiot send Liliana out of meeting and got roofied, kidnapped and r*ped. I mean you say all this about Mc being smart but isnt he an idiot. I mean nothing needs to be hidden from Liliana, but he sends her out. It makes no sense he makes such stupid decisions when you know the other person is crazy, tried to r*pe you in the past and what they have done in the past yet you get surprised when they do same thing again? just few words and you start getting tricked its absurd

Related Stories

I Can Copy And Evolve Talents

Here's the link to the discord server: https://discord.com/invite/XVNaUKEPmb The convolution of worlds are govern by a set of gods, each god is given a world to rule and there can be skirmishes between them – as a result of one between Nexus, the god of trickery and a senile old hag Elliot reincarnated into Ul’Tra-el by mistake. Ul’Tra-el is a world that grew a voice, because of this voice, it began to take a different path from other worlds -- it was filled with a core anomaly – rifts. Dimensions began to leak into each other, vomiting outrageous monsters. In response or as an auto-correction to such anomaly, talents were awakened in the inhabitants of Ul’Tra-el and they gained tremendous power, for every rift they close down, they were rewarded massively by the voice of the world called Ul. In a hardcore world like this one, our MC (Northern) reincarnated as a talentless individual but in the face of a death and a head splitting revelation... ...when all hopes seemed lost. {System Notice} Your Soul cannot take a form Searching for Unique pattern ability for your soul searching... search found. Unique System ability has been found... Unique System Ability [CopyCat] has been gained. Awakening Unique ability... Northern gained a talent copying system! ... Follow Northern through his journey as he becomes the pinnacle of this world. This a story about a white-haired boy’s rise from rubbles!! Note: This is an overpower genre but MC does not just start off like that. Even though MC can copy talents he doesn't just jump around copying talents because there's a limitation. However, his rise to strength is depicted and is an experience to enjoy. The first few hundreds would be frustrating to follow because MC is weak but that makes the experience all the more interesting when MC finally gets freaking strong and starts wiping the floor with everyones asses.

RighteousFilth Β· Fantasy
3.7
618 Chs