Item: DC: System Shock (COMPLETED)
Rating: 4.8
Author: Starkiller_Revan

Starkiller_RevanLv410mth

2024-01-30 03:17

Really enjoying the fic so far, the writing and story quality are pretty good and entertaining. The only complaint I’ve got is that it seems like nearly every possible thing that can go wrong, does. Almost every single thing the MC gains also comes with some sort of downside. I totally agree with not making the MC op af and actually forcing them to struggle throughout the story, but the constant use of these downsides and bad luck to hinder the MC’s growth is honestly getting somewhat repetitive.

DC: System Shock (COMPLETED)

Wicked132

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Liked by 16 people

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