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dertyp2021Lv33mth
2024-11-05 05:43

Loving each and every chapter. You truly managed to capture the One Piece vibe. The only thing I would like is more chapters

The Will of D. reamers

Pewpewcachoo
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Pewpewcachoo
PewpewcachooAuthor

I think this is a step up in writing from my other story. My writing has improved by a good bit and I think the over all quality is just better. That said, there are still flaws and I have a long way to go as a writer. But I hope that who ever reads my story will be happy with it and enjoy it.

5mth

The_Synonym
The_SynonymLv4

Pretty cool for now. The only problems I have with it is that the training arc is a bit too detailed for my taste and that the mc and the rest are a bit too young.

8mth
meHzyk
meHzykLv4

So far I've only seen chapter 1, the writing isn't bad, honestly I'm hoping for a pretty cool FF and maybe something different from the norm.

1yr
Humbuub
HumbuubLv4

a well-written fic, but I'm at chapter 40 yet MC is still a toddler. That's fine and all since the dialogues and interactions were great, but the slow release speed would easily wane your interest. My main complaint about MC is he hesitates a lot, in the world of One Piece that signifies a lot, he's the weakest willed among the ASML Squad, and this is his 2nd life.

6d
izzna
izznaLv14

Nice, worth reading! hope for more chapters though

1mth
Henzy_5477
Henzy_5477Lv1

The fic is pretty good so far. The writing is solid, it has frequent updates, the characters are portrayed well and are true to the source material, and it's a One Piece fic so the setting is no issue. There hasn't been much progress with the plot, but there are only 12 chapters at the time I'm writing this so it's to be expected that the story hasn't gone that far yet. I'm excited for it to break canon though, since that's what the synopsis implied.

9mth
Artoriapendraragon
ArtoriapendraragonLv14

overall it look good author hope for me just update is a bit unstable otherwise it a decent fic

9mth
Mweowhat
MweowhatLv4

hhhhhbhgddyddghhffgghhbfcffgggghhggvvvvb lets see this

1yr
LazyLord
LazyLordLv14

For only 9 chapters being released out so far & I’m already hooked should say something.🔥hope you don’t drop this

9mth
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