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2024-02-01 08:53

I love the left for dead 1 and 2 vibes love to see what's next

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Review: A Cringeworthy Power Fantasy Disguised as a Zombie Apocalypse Novel I really tried to give this light novel a chance, but after 40 chapters, I just couldn’t take it anymore. What could have been an interesting premise—a protagonist using both zombies and humans to create chaos and grow stronger—ends up as nothing more than a self-indulgent power fantasy riddled with absurd coincidences and terrible writing. Everything is Just Too Convenient From the very start, the story throws ridiculous luck at the MC. He just happens to stumble upon a well-equipped police officer who had a gun. And of course, he manages to kill him… with a small blade. Why? Because he apparently had a “tough childhood.” That’s it. No actual combat experience, no logical explanation for his ability to stay calm under pressure—just “I was bullied, so now I’m a ruthless killer.” Cringe and peak Chunibyo. The MC is Supposedly “Cold and Calculating,” But Acts Like a Wannabe Alpha Instead of actually developing himself, using strategy, or even making use of the system and the zombie outbreak to gain power, the MC does nothing but hoard weapons and collect women for his forced harem. The novel desperately wants us to believe he’s some kind of mastermind, but all he does is gather a bunch of brain-dead followers while acting like a generic “dark and edgy” protagonist. Side Characters Are Completely Useless The supporting cast might as well be brainless zombies themselves. They exist only to praise the MC, get saved by him, or serve as stepping stones to highlight how “badass” he is. The world is supposedly in chaos, yet somehow, only the MC is capable of doing anything remotely effective. It’s just lazy writing. The Author is Clearly Living Out His Fantasies Let’s be honest—the whole novel reads like it was written by someone who was bullied and now wants to self-insert as the ultimate revenge-fantasy character. The harem, the ridiculous power scaling, the forced edgy backstory—it all screams wish fulfillment. If the MC had at least been a former soldier, special forces, or someone with actual training, his actions might have made sense. But no, just being “traumatized” is enough to make him an elite killer, apparently. Final Verdict: A Waste of Time I went in expecting a smart, strategic MC who manipulates both humans and zombies to rise in power. Instead, I got an edgelord collecting scraps while pretending to be a ruthless “lone wolf” leader. This is nothing more than a poorly written fantasy of an author who clearly never moved past his teenage angst. Unless you enjoy cringe harem stories with zero logic, I wouldn’t waste my time on this.

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