Item: I Wish For the Top of the Tower
Rating: 5
Author: MIMI24

MIMI24Lv311mth

2024-01-20 02:30

The writing is good. It is just the beginning but the premise is good and has suspense. Cleo's backstory needs to be stronger. Waiting for the work to update more. All the bast.

I Wish For the Top of the Tower

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