Review Detail of Recklesspen in MMORPG: Kingdom Online

Shameless but prideful author here to review my story,Just so everyone knows I just got into MMORPG stories and I was like damn it I might as well write one.What to expect - (1) Some weird but unique characters that might make people wonder if am mentally stable (2) Some ridiculous ability that might make you also wonder if i really put some thought into them or got the idea from 8 years olds [That might be partially true](3) Op mc [Gojo satoru type of op] so if you don't like op mc then I don't know what to say (4) anything you see you get