This is a pretty great translation, the translator did a good job translating it by changing certain words and work sentences to fit the English language. The story itself is definitely better than other Douluo stories out there. This fanfic actually expands on the world background and character motivation that the original Douluo lacks and uses the irrational hate of Tang San from readers as characters in the story to disapprove the nonsensical reasons but also to remind the readers that a self-insert can't just rely on their canon knowledge to be overpowered because the story is only from the main character perspective. There is some difficulty in knowing who is who and why certain people hate other characters but this can be fixed by reading the original Douluo story or going on a wiki dive.
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