Attention: Disclaimer! 1) This work steers clear of gratuitous grimness and all related themes. If you relish reading about others' sufferings elevated to the extreme, do not even attempt to start this piece. Seriously, it's not for you. 2) The story is set in the game world, incorporating certain lore elements from Cyberpunk "2020", "2077", and "Blade Runner". Most of the information can be found on wikis, but it's not the gospel truth, so be mindful of the author's creative liberties.

I mean it's okay. A bit slow...too slow fo cyberpunk story in my opinion. Like it's going against what is cyberpunk all about. And that's not like a big problem, but ya know, it's not that intresting either.

Cyberpunk stories are few and far between such well written ones are even rarer. I’m enjoying this a lot just please please don’t fall into the trap of trying to please others with your stories direction. Don’t end up like Snail rewritting or dropping it’s your story write how you want. Rant over. Love what your doing so far.

Really well done, keep it up and don't drop the story, with enough chapters thus will blow up for sure.

One of the better ones in fanfiction in terms of writing. Bit on the slow side might say, but the worldbuilding covers up this slowness and keeps the story interesting. What makes it iffy for me is that some important story developments are being breeze through and just being told in a narration. Thus somehow in my opinion the story sometimes leans more like a biography or a diary. Though it feels like the story is still being set up in the 20+ chapters I have read and might be improved later. Overall, its worth a try in reading!

I'm a huge fan of cyberpunk, so I was thrilled to find this fanfic. Moreover, I was genuinely amazed at how well-written it is, a kind of breath of fresh air amidst all the systems and 'three wishes' stuff.

I really like this story and characters. I like reading stories like that, showing how a character you know from game or movies have a different life and encounters, leading to a better ending.

I read a few chapters and I'm really enjoying the writing. We experienced readers know how to distinguish between children's writing that appears to have been written by a child and mature writing that was done by an experienced or talented writer. In this fic it is the second, 5 star writing quality.

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