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The story was, unfortunately, a bit boring. The grammar and pace was good, but there were too many worlds combined into one, which made the story all over the place. The biggest disappointment was that the story had nothing to do with canon material, so at this point, it would have been much better suited as an original novel rather than a FF. Overall it is readable but you will probably get bored often. (at least I did). Also it is important to mention that the MC transformed into a girl multiple times (Just keep that in mind.)
[DXDxJJK] - The Father of Devils
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I apologize for the boring experience you had. Plotholes are something I strongly dislike, especially when they are noticeable to me. In an effort to address this, I have attempted to create a unique world that seamlessly combines elements from three different worlds. The initial chapters focused primarily on establishing the setting, which I understand may not have been as engaging. However, I want to assure you that the story WILL incorporate established canon, which has already begun in my exclusive Patreon chapters. I apologize for the prolonged buildup, but I appreciate your patience in reading and providing a review. I kindly request that you continue to read a few more chapters and see if I can change your perspective. Thank you for the review, It helps.