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Gutterstomp
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2024-01-30 01:48

I really enjoy this story, great grammar and the plot is progressing very nicely,. The only issue is that the side characters and their interactions doesn’t feel like how it would go if it was in the warhammer 40k verse, but being able to properly capture the feel of 40k is difficult so it’s understandable. Keep up the great work.

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