Review Detail of Luc4r1o in PYROSITES: My Heroines were truly Villainous

I only read the first 4 chapters, but i had to stop because it was so f**king cringe to read. Like the first person pov, where he makes stupid jokes in his head and then laughs about them. Those random words that i now know are supposed to be sounds. and his attitude where he just straight up insults a god in his mind while talking to him. or about his name, his mother (who calls him cutie all the time) lays him to bed an tells him that tomorrow is his b-day and he will get his name and we hear his words: "whaa ... what do you mean my name, cutie isn't my name?!?! heh ... just kidding i mean obviously it's not my name, i mean you would need to be a psychopath to name your child like that." things like that, i don't know how anybody can read this and not cringe. so yeah, here you go