Review Detail of Nova_Bogatsu in Reborn as a Dragon with Devouring System
Review detail
The concept is very cool and the update schedule is cool...but the thing that ruins it for me is the lack of soul in the story(chat gpt story),it's very robotic which makes the story boring and ruins the immersion .The world building aspect is very limited since we see it from the black dragon,so far the actions of the Mc haven't really done anything to affect his surrounding especially his appetite (like how does the blue dragon handle this minor food shortage ,how do the elves feel about this etc). I'm at the chapter before it gets locked and that's all the bad things so far,especially the robotic feel of the story
Reborn as a Dragon with Devouring System
Rqmk
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rather than written by gpt it's more like translated/rewritten by gpt. I remember the light novel that had a similar storyline- I read it mtl and it was close. Though it seems like parts of the story got skipped instead of rewritten. The dragon spent quite a while meeting with the ware wolves, the goblins, and the kobolds. all while hiding in the river. I had to at least say my favorite part in this story, is where the werewolf turned into a goblin then into a kobold all in the same chapter with absolutely no context.
Rqmk:sorry for that, will work to improve it, BTW thanks for the feedback.
Rqmk:right now it's single female lead, can't say that for sure we'll see how it goes.
Rqmk:right now it's single female lead, can't say that for sure we'll see how it goes.
Author I would also please like to suggest that you give Bruce more personality and you put in more dialogue to the story. It truly is a boring read with all these over the top descriptive words. I’ve come across instances where what you wrote could have been put in a more interesting way yet you just threw multiple big words that dulled it for me.
Rqmk:Ok, see you then.
Seyitan_Odufalu:Author I would also please like to suggest that you give Bruce more personality and you put in more dialogue to the story. It truly is a boring read with all these over the top descriptive words. I’ve come across instances where what you wrote could have been put in a more interesting way yet you just threw multiple big words that dulled it for me.
