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Reimoss
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2024-04-26 14:20

Boring. It has grammar mistakes here and there, then there is this constant use of 'gonna' which is annoying af. 50 chapters of... nothing, they're too short and it's already showing signs of a dumb story. Him being like a big brother to Naruto and others, saying stuff he shouldn't say, system shop (with passives? only), random pet out of nowhere and more that I can't be bothered to remember. The novel could've been amazing if the author bothered a little more.

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Han_989
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Thanks for the reviews, and read it that far. sorry for grammar mistake and short chapter because limited time that i have.

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