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Vervainiasi
VervainiasiLv1511mth
2024-06-21 22:25

So the good is the story premise is promising. To be fair I haven't gotten through all the free chapters yet, but from what I have seen it's an entertaining read. The characters are entertaining, if a bit stereotypical. She's a beautiful orphan raised by her grandparents into a beautiful kind soul who is bullied at work. Oh and a family status hidden behind being an orphan. One of the villains is the office lead who is jealous of the MC and worried about being replaced in her office romance. So she leads the bullying of the MC, who just takes it. Stereotypical is not a bad thing, I'm just giving a heads-up if you are looking for a different sort of MC. She gets stronger. Now for the criticism, the writing style is very amateur. It hops from tense to tense and person to person. It hops between first and third person like it's a game of hot potato. The author does have a firm grasp of English but seems to rely on the same words over and over. In the early chapters, the majority of sentences started with She. This is actually what gave me the urge to write a review. I think the author would benefit from an editor or the use of editing software to help with the consistency of tense and person. I don't want the author to give up, I think they show some promise, and this isn't a bad novel. I look forward to their growth and next work.

My 100th Rebirth a day before the Apocalypse

GoddessKM
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GoddessKM
GoddessKMAuthor

Hi everyone, your author here 🥰🥰🥰 I sincerely hope that you guys will love the book. Your support is everything to me. Thank you!!!🫶🏻🫶🏻🫶🏻

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Diana_Salvador
Diana_SalvadorLv1

My 100th Rebirth a day before the Apocalypse is an engaging novel. This novel promises an engaging mix of genres, making it an exciting read for those who enjoy tales of personal growth.

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Melody_Joy_Umayam
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Finally! a novel worth reading for! ✨ The author's vocabulary was superb and well chosen. It opens the subconscious minds of the readers with regards of the reality a human being might experience in this chaotic world. This novel is highly recommended. 🖤

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Eva_999
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THe story is very interesting and totally my cup of tea 😍😍😍

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katzdoromal
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My 100th Rebirth a Day Before the Apocalypse" is a super cool story about Kisha, a regular person who works in an office. One day, she sees a countdown, and suddenly her brain gets a warning about the world ending. To survive, she has to use a system that helps her. 😱😱😱 Kisha realizes the system is her only help in a world where people act really badly, don't trust each other, and might betray at any moment. It's like a tough lesson for her to learn how to survive in a world full of zombies.😰😰😰 The interesting part is she has to die 99 times to understand people better and get stronger. You'll keep wondering if she can survive the 100th time and if she'll find more problems than just staying alive.🤯🤯🤯 This book is exciting, and even though it's a bit tricky at times, it's worth reading. If you like stories about surviving tough situations and uncovering secrets, you'll enjoy "My 100th Rebirth a Day Before the Apocalypse. 🫰🫰🫰🌟🌟

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Autum_Sweet_Girl
Autum_Sweet_GirlLv12

I can’t believed that the very first book I read in this platform has become so wonderful after some time. I love apocalypse genre and strong women and to think that the female lead in this novel are both strong and smart. I can’t even dislike her as she was always level headed and at first it was confusing and thought that she was too stupid and weak to die 99 times before learning her lesson but then, after some time it was explained why. I already speculated some reasons as what was happening why her syatem was so against her success but I still wanted to know what the author really prepared because she seems to usually put some trap to make the readers think of a possibility only to make dismantle that belief and introduce a different path or solution, the plot was flowing like water and there was never a dull moment for me especially the chemistry between Duke and Kisha. They are just the perfect couple and I love them and their intimate moments 🤭🤭❤️❤️❤️❤️ Thank you author for this wonderful novel, I would love to stay and continue reading in this platform and hope to see another gem because I really love reading and live in the world the authors created for us readers

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Dragonylf
DragonylfLv13

UGH I WANT MORE PLS FEED MY AUTHOR NOONA

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DaoistecqtnX
DaoistecqtnXLv12

This novel has potential to be a great read. I'm down for rebirth and apocalypse but 100 rebirths ? that's overkill. Especially when FL has the system with her l, since the end of her first life ( one that ended as soon as apocalypse hits). I really want to admire the FL's abilities but just can't. It took her 20 lives to realised that the government isn't functioning and no help is coming...seriously? she kept failing, even with so many lives, experiences and help from system. honestly I find this book enjoyable, but FL is too mediocre.

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Doodles_Verona_2478
Doodles_Verona_2478Lv15

I stopped reading after Sparrow’s death! 😭🥺

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miatanaka_011
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I totally love this book, I enjoy how the author writes the whole story background, the progress of the story and its characters. I highly recommend that you read this story and more of the author's work and you will never regret it! Totally worth the read! I became a fan! ❤️

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