Where should I start. The story is okay, Great even as it develops, it starts very messy too many flowery words and complicated descriptions that add nothing but author said he or she will address that so new readers should be fine, writing is good, i think Author employs help of ai but thats not a problem as long as grammar is good and story is good i read. The story gets less messy when the brother comes back which i think is around chapter 23. Its getting better, im not sure about how many releases per day or week but i think I'll pick it up on my main account if the updates are normal. Keep going Author-kun/chan there is promising stuff here hope this encourages you to not drop. I hope you keep your word and improve.
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