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InfinityWolfS2
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2024-02-21 13:12

Bem não tem muito oque dizer. Vamos começar com o MC completa perda de tempo, se oque acontece com ele fosse uma situação real ele estaria morto assim que foi convocado.(bom que não seja). A dificuldade para ele aumentar o poder é muito grande(não fui muito a frente do romance) pelo menos para mim, devido as escolhas idiot@s dele. E acima de tudo para um Rei Demônio ele é patético e fraco. Se o autor(a) queria que ele fosse fraco do jeito que ele é, era melhor te-lo convocar como um demônio normal, e assim ele iria subindo no poder, pois acho que para conseguir o titulo de Rei Demônio precisa de muito mais do que pecado. Fora o absurdo da Santa que depois de todo esse tempo deveria ser extremamente mais forte que ele e sua raça.( não cheguei nessa parte, apenas suposição).

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Hail_The_loli
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Obrigado pela sua crítica. Bem, ele não é fraco. Alguém que consegue derrotar os 2 apóstolos demônios mais fortes com apenas 2 movimentos não é fraco. Bem, mesmo que ele tenha usado um truque, foi a estratégia dele que o fez vencer. Se fosse uma luta real, ambos os apóstolos estariam mortos. Já que ele vai matar o demônio da espada e depois o grande demônio, e também o demônio perverso. Mas como nas crônicas dos caídos, a força sozinha não vai determinar o resultado da luta final. E a verdadeira trama começará depois que ele for para o mundo humano.

InfinityWolfS2
InfinityWolfS2Lv2

Entendo, obrigado por explicar. Mais não é para mim. Boa sorte em seu trabalho.

Hail_The_loli:Obrigado pela sua crítica. Bem, ele não é fraco. Alguém que consegue derrotar os 2 apóstolos demônios mais fortes com apenas 2 movimentos não é fraco. Bem, mesmo que ele tenha usado um truque, foi a estratégia dele que o fez vencer. Se fosse uma luta real, ambos os apóstolos estariam mortos. Já que ele vai matar o demônio da espada e depois o grande demônio, e também o demônio perverso. Mas como nas crônicas dos caídos, a força sozinha não vai determinar o resultado da luta final. E a verdadeira trama começará depois que ele for para o mundo humano.
Hail_The_loli
Hail_The_loliAuthor

obrigado.

InfinityWolfS2:Entendo, obrigado por explicar. Mais não é para mim. Boa sorte em seu trabalho.
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LamenThief
LamenThiefLv4

você é br mano?

Hail_The_loli:Obrigado pela sua crítica. Bem, ele não é fraco. Alguém que consegue derrotar os 2 apóstolos demônios mais fortes com apenas 2 movimentos não é fraco. Bem, mesmo que ele tenha usado um truque, foi a estratégia dele que o fez vencer. Se fosse uma luta real, ambos os apóstolos estariam mortos. Já que ele vai matar o demônio da espada e depois o grande demônio, e também o demônio perverso. Mas como nas crônicas dos caídos, a força sozinha não vai determinar o resultado da luta final. E a verdadeira trama começará depois que ele for para o mundo humano.
Hail_The_loli
Hail_The_loliAuthor

.Não, por quê?!

LamenThief:você é br mano?
LamenThief
LamenThiefLv4

vi seu comentario em pt, achei que fosse. você usa um tradutor ou aprendeu a lingua mesmo?

Hail_The_loli:.Não, por quê?!
Hail_The_loli
Hail_The_loliAuthor

Eu sei um pouco de português e, com a ajuda do Google Tradutor, consigo fazer o trabalho hehe~

LamenThief:vi seu comentario em pt, achei que fosse. você usa um tradutor ou aprendeu a lingua mesmo?
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