Item: The Elven Lord's Awakening
Rating: 5
Author: Ray_Y

Ray_YLv25mth

2024-06-30 10:38

I thoroughly enjoyed this story! The world-building is impressive, and the plot is engaging. The protagonist's journey kept me hooked as I read. Though the MC's character could use some development, the thought process of his is very deep and shows great potential. I appreciate the author's fresh style and am excited to see where the story goes. Highly recommended for a refreshing and immersive read. Keep up the great work! In the beginning chapters of the book, the author uses 'I' too many times. Just one thing I would like to recommend the author is to try finding alternatives, instead of overusing 'I'(s).

The Elven Lord's Awakening

Allen_Clay012

4.9

72 Chs

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Allen_Clay012Author

Hello, this is the author. Let's ignore the ratings and move on to what I have to say. To those who read as far as the locked chapters, I would like to thank you guys! Your interest and support inspired me to continue writing this story. That's all that I wanted to say, to the readers of this story. Don't worry, I'll continue writing until I finish this story. I will do my best not to drop this story. Thank you for reading and good day!

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The_ProcrastinatorLv4

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MyCatLovesMeLv2

I loved it, but when I saw the System I couldn't understand it much, somethings looked like they were apart of the story itself, other than that it was nice I sent a fan club so have fun with that

10mth

Ryker_BaleLv13

5 stars from me to make you sure u r doing good work, I liked it maybe it will not turn in a way all such stories goes... I mean I will keep reading and try to find something refreshing, for now the protagonist seems to be cool and I see u worked hard to bring this world up. Cheers.

10mth

Harely_Quinn123Lv2

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FuguFishLv4

Love the story so far,if I had to pick smthing I loved about it would be the interesting set up with reverse transmigration and what. The mc is doing, also loved the Star Wars reference, but there is very little things I hated like the mc’s reaction or actions sometimes to certain situations and I think we jumped from normal life to another immediately it wasn’t bad but all in all a good read so far

9mth

Jinx_LeeLv3

The story was focused about the mc reincarnated as an ordinary human, and as i read it further, I was amazed by the discovery that it was a system novel. Great story, the author did a great job and I am proud as a fellow Filipino author. Kudos! ❤️

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JBFIRE_77Lv4

Is there romance in this novel? please no it holds back the MC

10mth

PEARL_WANGLv11

The writer's style is fresh and new, I extremely liked the transition and the prose. There are only eight chapters for now, I will come back to read more before giving a more comprehensive review. I just want to say I liked the characters a lot and their names too.

10mth

DivineCrimsonLv12

Story starts of strong and engaging. The character design and the plot is excellent. So far it's been a good read and showed high potential. Highly recommend.

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