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Na1gel
Na1gelLv49mth
2024-03-17 09:51

its pretty hard to understand the begning of the story it just confusing asf... and the author goes with the whole chineseish spin on his writing and if u expect a thrilling spin of the cannon stories .. well ur wrong its all oc he just borrows the names of the places and makes up his own story its good but not what i was after i came for a fanfic not some original novel with some names and characters that are the same... and back to the chinese thingy.. he joins a specific group in asterisk war world where they all talk like chinese cultivators so if its not to ur liking you should stay away it was truly hard for me to read thru all this imo i hate chinese styled writing.... it just sounds stupid and their saying just makes me want to die ... anyways i dident bother to read more then 30 chapters and i had to really force myself to do it .. the dialouge was really har with the wuxia style xD anyways its not all bad , the author writes really really well its not just my cup of tea !

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Na1gel
Na1gelLv4

ah.. and if u expect romance dont be to suprised you can littarly feel that author just bait readers with it ... he dont seem to want to write it lol.. he saying stuff like " i like to take it slow and let it come natural" but imo it just feels like an exucse to not need to write about it i bet it will atleast take 150 chapter or something b4 he even go close to "normal" romance lol

MartialG0D
MartialG0DLv4

thanks for the warning ! .. i thought this fic has romance

Na1gel:ah.. and if u expect romance dont be to suprised you can littarly feel that author just bait readers with it ... he dont seem to want to write it lol.. he saying stuff like " i like to take it slow and let it come natural" but imo it just feels like an exucse to not need to write about it i bet it will atleast take 150 chapter or something b4 he even go close to "normal" romance lol
Spidergod8821
Spidergod8821Lv4

it has a Romance tag so it would make sense to have a romance

MartialG0D:thanks for the warning ! .. i thought this fic has romance
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