Review Detail of Salem_Zaed in NARUTO : jujutsu template system ( will continue soon )

The story is good and I like it, I like how Danzo is especially sense all the other fanfic have described him as an asshole( which he is) but I think this is the first fanfic that doesn’t show him as a complete evil guy. The only thing I don’t like is when the author start using Japanese words for spells and other things I don’t memorize them and I think them being translated to English will be better. Oh almost forgot I think the author is giving the Mc the template so fast, I don’t mind the Mc becoming Op but not in the start of the story especially not at such a young age maybe wait until he go to war. Anyway thanks author