Mediocre translation and reads like a grocery list lol. Dry facts

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it has a lot of potential this a good book as you can perfect you translation🔄🔤

i like this a lot but will there be anything with the great ape transformation like super Saiyan 4. Or even something with ikari. I think that would open up a lot more transformations like a mix of super Saiyan god and super Saiyan 4 would be awesome

He did this, then he did that,two months later he did this, 3 years later he did that. This is just a summary with absurd time skips. No recommended, it's not worth the wasted time

This is those Chinese cultivation stories but it is Dragon Ball. That's the only difference. Otherwise it is no different than a cultivation story with bad writing.

I enjoyed reading this very much although there are some Chinese moments (which is inevitable i guess) but overall this is good. Specially the world building, all kinds of DB shows are in here. Just hoping it'll keep updating.

Good story i read next charapter too and guys you dont lose nothing because story become cultivation novel with chinese mythology[img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]

Não é ruim. Embora eu n seja um grande fã das transformações como o 5,6, etc, achei interessante suas colocações nessa fanfic. As viagens no tempo e as contra-partes deixaram a leitura extremamente confusa. A personalidade do MC é a melhor de todas as FF de DB que já li, mesmo tendo tanto poder ele ainda não parou de treinar, além de treinar os outros personagens tbm. O nivel de poder escalou dpara fora dos limites, não tenho certeza de como vai proceder os próximos capítulos mas acho que decorrente as atividades dos últimos o melhor a se fazer é procurar um bom final rapidamente e não arrastar mais.