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Velstad
VelstadLv138mth
2024-03-26 21:16

The main characters are both lovable and frustrating, making them feel incredibly human. While I don't typically read FL books, this one is quite enjoyable. The world-building, character's and their development, and grammar are all very well done in this novel. I'm eagerly awaiting more chapters, keep up the great work author!

The First Princess of Averlyon

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4.9
142 Chs

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Tsukasa0
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I'll be honest here, I don't write reviews much, much less for romance novels which I didn't read any till this one caught my attention and I gave it a chance and I would like to say it right here, I never thought I would enjoy a romance novel this much! As a fantasy reader and author, I never really delved into romance stories since they didn't typically have fantasy but I have to say the story, the pacing, the character development, I'm loving everything about this novel and it has me hooked. I hope the author continues her great work and I'll definitely read this further! 👌👌One last thing I would like to say is: Layla best!!!❤❤

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Vanilla_Chino
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It's entreating, well written, and the highlight is the characters. The world is fairly simple but the focus is on the political dynamics and characters. I would recommend it to anyone who enjoys that sort of thing. Happy writing dear author, keep up the hard work!

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Blak_cherry
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I must say, from the start of the story and the chapter I am currently in, it has been nothing but drama and suspense. The characterization is strong and well established in the story as well as the well drawn background. I see no reason why this book deserves less than a five star ❤️

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Congratulations on finishing the Summer Sprinting Party! [img=recommend]

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Quite an interesting story with a lot of stuff going on. In my opinion the characters are quite lively and fun to read. Their background is a thing that makes me want to squish their cheeks and step in between them to fix some things, but that only makes it more entertaining

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YoungMasterFox
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This Fox likes the dynamics between FL and ML! They're both funny and annoying at the same time. Would definitely recommend it!

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CyberDevil_2051
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Good,nice,great brilliant, congratulations you are the potential one

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Caomelon
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Tia seems like an interesting character. I would love to see her character development. Also, Yuden ain't making a good first impression on me 👀 My dear Playboy Prince, I am looking forward to your redemption arc. Overall, it's a fun read.

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Aoki_kun
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Subjective Reviews: There's a lot drama happend here, and the quiet like it actually. I have already add it to my library, i hope the author can keep updating!

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