I like the idea but the first job he got. He made it overly complicated when it's just a comedy role and a multi cam sitcom. Truthfully, he acted like it was a drama. Bordering on Shakespeare. As long as you have enough charisma, those multi camp sitcoms are easy. Chrisma, comedy timing that's all you need. That is, if you're a talented actor. He's already described how he's not fking talented at all. How he screwed up every single level of acting that you can. Unless he suddenly got more talented all the sudden. This is even more unrealistic than those system novels. You don't just acquire talent. Most people, even if they become experienced, actors don't acquire talent above their level. A b list actor can become an A list actor by experience. But a C list actor can almost never become a A list actor unless they get one role that is perfect for them. Sarah hyland hasnt done much of note since modern family as an example.

Nothing to complain but the author repeats his sentences a lot like an AI not knowing the stuff it already generated. Also, mc makes some no-brainer mistakes here and there like, not going search binge about his new world, since for all he knew he transmigrated into Marvel, going to McDonald's, (hehe), etc.

okay.... youre to heavy to write with AI. for somone that read many book looking at your writing made me sick. use AI for your inspiration or to solving writer block because human brain is better than low end artificial inteligent learning machine. i apreciate your determination but your writing suck

I liked your other work so i will give this a try

Please stop dropping your fics in favor a new one. It really frustrating investing time in reading then you just drop it out of nowhere. ..

The writing is essentially GPT-slop. At least 60% of the wordcount could be removed and it would only leave a better story behind. Characters feel disingenuous, as every piece of stilted dialogue has been turned into fancy-sounding drivel by letting the AI (re-?)write it for you, and it really killed any chance of it ever becoming a decent story. Other than that, it drags on to a ridiculous degree, some movies taking up an endless amount of time for no reason, with scenes repeated from different points of view. Every movie generally feels the same in the characters' reactions and the general progression, which leaves behind a boring, repetitive story full of holes and an extreme overuse of AI writing. It's also very clear that you haven't done sufficient research on how movie-making, auditions or general Hollywood works. Then there's the songs forced into every project, even when they don't even remotely fit. Overall, you should be pretty ashamed of this. If it had at least been your own writing, it might be a bit more interesting, but when you run everything through an AI and just release it like that, your own voice and style is completely lost. What's left behind is a story with zero soul. Hopefully you find some way to raise your standards if you want to keep writing, if you can even call this writing.

You gotta reduce your reliance on AI bro. 5 stars for effort, but if you want your vocab to improve by leaps and bounds... read books. I'm not talking about fanfics on this platform, real fantasy books. It's how I developed my eloquence in the English language. Just a suggestion from someone writing a fanfic, with a similar premise.

Loved it. Your novel inspired me to watch 127 hours, which was an emotional rollercoaster. Keep it up dude.[img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=update]

okay its realy good. if you havent read manhwa the movie is real then read it. it have same vibe but this novel fix the problem on manhwa. its good potensial, and i hope author can continue writing unlike movie is real author that on sick leave in covid era that we didnt know he is dead or alive.