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One_Winged_Angel
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2024-01-12 01:25

!!!!SPOILER WARNING!!!! Alright, so this is a great read! The novel is honestly an excellent surprise! Gal has done an amazing job of creating an interesting and new world. Writing Quality: 5/5 - honestly I couldn’t find anything to point out. There may have been something here and there but to be fair, I didn’t see anything. Update Stability: 5/5 - Chapters have been updated daily, the novel is still new, so this is a mulligan. If there’s anything to say, this won’t be dropping as New Eden has maintained consistency. Story Development: 5/5 - A lot of information has been revealed during the first six chapters but isn’t just thrown at you. It’s paced out well and the plot is interesting and compelling. Character Design: 5/5 - Henry (Karl) is a good main character and his drive to push the story forward is believable (as a father myself, if my son was killed I too would be compelled to do the same as him.) World Background: 5/5 - futuristic world? Check. Murderous AI? Check. Colonizing aliens? Check. System? Check! We haven’t been given much about the entire situation, but everything we have received has been intriguing and makes you want to learn more. Overview: 5/5 - can’t express enough how great this novel is. You will not be disappointed picking this one up. A strong contender in WSA and Gal is coming out swinging HARD! Another pleasant surprise was getting SG vibes as I first read. What are you doing still reading this review? Add this to your library and go read it, right now!

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Galanar
GalanarAuthor

I'm going at this WSA like Floyd Mayweather! If I lose, I'll be going down swingin'!

Dexter_Sled_1111
Dexter_Sled_1111Lv13

Don't worry, just write till the best of your abilities.

Galanar:I'm going at this WSA like Floyd Mayweather! If I lose, I'll be going down swingin'!
Romance_guy
Romance_guyLv14

Romance?

Galanar:I'm going at this WSA like Floyd Mayweather! If I lose, I'll be going down swingin'!
Galanar
GalanarAuthor

A little maybe. But it is not the focus of this story.

Romance_guy:Romance?
Romance_guy
Romance_guyLv14

That’s ok

Galanar:A little maybe. But it is not the focus of this story.
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