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2024-02-25 21:06

This novel has an amazing plot, not too original, although it has enough ability to stand out. I gave the writing quality 4 stars since I'm sure author-san can do way better. It's like a a sharp blade with some tiny nicks on the edges. Story development; Even in the early chapters, I can already see signs of sharp plot twists. I didn't expect that part where the male lead said he relished in their suffering or something like that after those people were caught in a fire. His work. Although, I'd advise the author to take some scenes slowly and elaborate more but it's good too. 4 stars. ⭐⭐⭐⭐ Character design; ⭐⭐⭐ As the author introduced new characters, she didn't give much of a description so we could only use our imagination and the uploaded character art. Updating stability; 3 stars. 3 chapters a week isn't enough for some readers and also, this book is still in its early stages. Perhaps you can take it slowly when you enter 3 digits. World background; 5 stars. The author seems to have an understanding of the government to make a stable system like that even though the MC wants to destroy it. 🙏

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