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Okojus
OkojusAuthor1yr
2024-01-03 21:42

Shameless Author review The novel is a 10/10 in my heart and I'll make sure to make this the best novel it can be in your eyes too. (PS Treat this review as a Q&A and ask me anything you're curious about?)

Calamity Upon This World

Okojus
4.7
166 Chs

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Margotha_jiny
Margotha_jinyLv2

what was the inspiration for this novel and what keeps on motivating you to continue writing?

1yr
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Okojus
OkojusAuthor

one day when I was sleeping I had a dream about this world, about these characters after that whenever I couldn't sleep I started thinking up ideas and concepts which exist in this world and before I knew it I had a whole universe inside my head, so to make sure I don't go insane I decided to write this novel with hopes of monetizing my schizophrenia 🗿🗿

Margotha_jiny:what was the inspiration for this novel and what keeps on motivating you to continue writing?
1yr
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Okojus
OkojusAuthor

as for what motivates me to continue writing novel,I love this world far more than anyone can comprehend which compels me to want to tell the story of these characters.

Margotha_jiny:what was the inspiration for this novel and what keeps on motivating you to continue writing?
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Ashborn1609
Ashborn1609Lv4

please tell me if it's a single fl or more than one wife /girl for Mc?

1yr
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Swiftescape
SwiftescapeLv15

Why add villain tag if mc not a villain.

1yr
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Okojus
OkojusAuthor

Single Fl

Ashborn1609:please tell me if it's a single fl or more than one wife /girl for Mc?
1yr
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Javon_Nixon
Javon_NixonLv14

You should probably remove that villain tag because one of the most compiling thing about a villain protagonist is that they intentionally stand against society and the moral values society adheres to. By having the villain tag but not even attempting to write a villain will attract the wrong audience, resulting in bad reviews, lackluster fans and a loss of motivation to continue your work.

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1yr
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Okojus
OkojusAuthor

Yo dude ignore whatever I said before MC is a villain.

Swiftescape:Why add villain tag if mc not a villain.
1yr
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Okojus
OkojusAuthor

Yea my bad I guess I was high before I looked back at my story framework and MC is most definitely a villain.

Javon_Nixon:You should probably remove that villain tag because one of the most compiling thing about a villain protagonist is that they intentionally stand against society and the moral values society adheres to. By having the villain tag but not even attempting to write a villain will attract the wrong audience, resulting in bad reviews, lackluster fans and a loss of motivation to continue your work.
1yr
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Swiftescape
SwiftescapeLv15

Okojus:Yea my bad I guess I was high before I looked back at my story framework and MC is most definitely a villain.
1yr
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fukkinchicken
fukkinchickenLv11

So cool, I'm gonna enjoy your world Author-san, keep it up!

Okojus:one day when I was sleeping I had a dream about this world, about these characters after that whenever I couldn't sleep I started thinking up ideas and concepts which exist in this world and before I knew it I had a whole universe inside my head, so to make sure I don't go insane I decided to write this novel with hopes of monetizing my schizophrenia 🗿🗿
1yr
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Okojus
OkojusAuthor

thanks hope you enjoy the novel

fukkinchicken:So cool, I'm gonna enjoy your world Author-san, keep it up!
1yr
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Dark_Renega
Dark_RenegaLv14

well and when the villain part start? cuz as of now I don't really see it 😭😂

Okojus:Yea my bad I guess I was high before I looked back at my story framework and MC is most definitely a villain.
1yr
Okojus
OkojusAuthor

OG MC was a villain meant to destroy everything as for current MC I can't spoil it

Dark_Renega:well and when the villain part start? cuz as of now I don't really see it 😭😂
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The_18_magicians
The_18_magiciansLv13

is the book over ? @Okojus

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DevilDarkness
DevilDarknessLv4

A nice story with a detailed world building and good characters to support. mc isn't a sissy righteous fool so that's good to see. not many cliches till I read and no grammar mistakes either so that's a plus. give it a read. keep it up author.

1yr

Magecrafter
MagecrafterLv14

This book is a fun read! The characters (especially the MC) might seem immature at first, cus he’s a kid, but he slowly grows as the story progresses. Favorite aspect is just the sheer chaos and destruction that the author just throws around. If you read the first chapter, you’ll get it. Anyway, it’s a great book. Would highly recommend giving it a try.

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Satan03
Satan03Lv4

One of the best novels's, I've read this far on this app... appreciate the author for his work 🔥🔥 keep cooking author!!!!

1yr
PikaAndrew
PikaAndrewLv4

A Well Written story that will hopefully one day become a masterpiece is what this story is and it shows how even if you are talented it often comes with downsides and that you should never settle and keep striving forward!

1yr
Danatos_2000
Danatos_2000Lv10

as a new and upcoming author this guy has done a good job with the novel so far. not some generic everyday trash. try it out people

1yr
ImShadow
ImShadowLv14

Good world building , characters and power system , I never did review before so I will keep it simple : it’s a really good novel at least I enjoy reading it so give it a try !

1yr
Carnic_321
Carnic_321Lv4

the stories really good so far it has some unique troops that i’ve never really seen be used together read this story if you want the growth of a Overpowered character also the authors interactive (at least on his discord) so there probably won’t be a hiatus and if there is you can just hound him until he does update

1yr
deadmandreaming
deadmandreamingLv14

An interesting novel, it breaks away from a few of the cliches of the genre with the mc transmigrating into a world he doesn't know in advance. Also, while he is ridiculously overpowered he is also ridiculously unlucky which is a good balancing element and pretty funny. I really like the mc's parents, they're not npcs like in most novels. Grammar could use some improvement but it reads fairly well. I recommend you give it a read.

1yr
Nirvana_Saint
Nirvana_SaintLv4

my friend recommended...so I'll give it 5 stars....love the effort

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