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Review Detail of Manan25ia in Harry Potter: I'm James Potter.

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went from great to worst in a chapter...the moment he met Sirius black James ppotter ent from smart to the one we read in actual book...prank and quidditch that's all his life is about..I don't say stop this..but he stopped training stopped studying .he was supposed col and smart and went to become dumb and annoying .. literally in one ch you write James would rather spend time wasting with Sirius than in Library .I was happy to find a good fanfic but you ruined it the moment he met Sirius ..fcuk you author and a lot of slangs I said to you in my mind..

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