Just got done reading the 49 chapter prolouge and decided to write this review before starting the real story. I'm not going to comment much on the grammar and sentence structuring, as the author does gradually improve further down the line. The first 15 chapters might have been some of the worst that I have read on Webnovel. It's filled with a copious amount of info dump that's written in a report format, making the read an absolute chore. I'm not sure what the author was thinking, but there are probably less than 2-3 character dialogs in each chapter, with most of it being a summary of mundane and irrelevant events. Chapter 16 onwards, the story gets a bit more interesting, and we finally get some character interactions. There is still an abundance of unnecessary info dump. However, the main character does get a lot more focus. 30 chapters into the story, and it finally feels like the author has upgraded his writing style. You also see a significant improvement in his grammar and sentence structuring. The story starts to feel more alive, and it no longer feels like a chore to read each chapter. There are still some plot holes, but it's negligible as this is just a prolouge. This does make me look forward to the future chapters after his regression, and my expectations are still relatively high for now.
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Thanks for the review but sorry to break it to you, I am going on a 1 month hiatus to fix my initial chapters as my author friends suggested me to fix them or no matter how much I improve, readers will not bother to stay. Also, once again, thanks for pointing out the mistakes, I will keep them in my mind when fixing my glaring mistakes. I will be releasing a second novel in the meanwhile to participate in June WPC, if you would like, please check it out!
