This is my first ever novel, so if you have some suggestion or criticism then lay it all down here, and if you liked the story then please add it to your library for further updates.

The beginning a bit generic, but if you give it time you definitely won't regret. The chapters are short and easy to read and follow... So please give it a try

An interesting premise, albeit slightly cliche introduction, and while there are some mistakes here and there, the potential is high. Good luck, Author! 🙏

the only reason why I took a point off is because of how short the chapters are as I feel like more can be expanded on each chapter to give a more "detailed " look at the game.

Your work is truly a compelling read, offering a unique take on the isekai genre. It's genuinely worth diving into. It's truly a captivating read, offering a distinctive narrative that sets it apart. The exploration of this unconventional perspective adds an intriguing layer to the storytelling. Without a doubt, it's a literary journey that is truly worth immersing oneself in.

Very nice premise and pacing. The writing quality is decent, there are a few puncation errors but they're easy to fix. Other than that, the story seems to be good so far.

Good story . It's catchy and intriguing . Easy to understand and enjoy the story . Fighting Author . Recommended to system stories lovers . Give it a try

I honestly love the story, it's so funny that one of the first things that would come to your mind when you're dying is that you're still a Virgin and a 35 year old starting his life again reincarnated as a 7 year old boy is so cool. First time reading reincarnation novel and I honestly love it. I recommend it, read it add to your collection, it's amazing

I love every bit of the main character. his death almost made me laugh. imagine rising back from near death and the next thing was "Are you dumb!"Great book! please update more!

Unknown here , A really good read, a different take of isekai. It's really worth reading .