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Angela_Fitri
Angela_FitriLv110mth
2024-01-15 10:25

I hope you will always continue this, I still can't see whether this will be good or not because it's still at the beginning of the story, this 5 star is my support for you making an interesting story[img=recommend]

Shadowbound Conquest

Fiction_Falcon
5.0
15 Chs

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Fiction_Falcon
Fiction_FalconAuthor

Dear readers, it's the author speaking. I want to express my gratitude for taking the time to read my debut novel. I acknowledge the areas where I may have fallen short in terms of grammar, plot, and various other aspects of the story. I am committed to enhancing the quality of my novel, and I welcome your suggestions and constructive criticism. Please refrain from using insults or curses, as I believe that constructive feedback is instrumental in my growth as a writer. Thank you all for your support, and I aspire to continue writing this novel seamlessly and conclude it flawlessly.

10mth

NickyAlicia
NickyAliciaLv3

I like it, 5 stars for you, for the beginning of a novel, this is quite good, although I think there are some words that are not suitable but I can understand that because this is the first time you have written.I hope you are always enthusiastic in continuing this novel.

10mth
Namiratuzzahra
NamiratuzzahraLv1

I like how this novel runs, not too fast and too slow, but I still don't know how the author will bring the conflict and tension that will occur in this novel, I hope it's good and enjoyable

10mth
ZachZnyder
ZachZnyderLv1

What are your plans with this novel? You still haven't signed the contract, or you won't do it?, whatever it is I will read this novel and support you[img=coins]

10mth
Faiz_Hasby
Faiz_HasbyLv1

there are still some small errors in indicating whether she or he, because of that I was confused and needed to re-read at least 2 times the previous paragraph, but overall I liked this story, do your best author

10mth
VanirReader
VanirReaderLv1

I will read your novels from now on, but when do you usually update new chapters? Is there no fixed schedule for new chapters to appear?, Also I hope you can find a proofreader so that your writing gets better.

10mth
CamraMan
CamraManLv1

I really like the character design you made, it's very cool and also very sexy, so I'm curious how you made it? Did you use the services of a freelancer? or do you do it yourself with AI?

10mth
Cecilia_Faruk
Cecilia_FarukLv1

I've read up to chapter 12 and still haven't found what differentiates this novel from other transmigration novels, but if you look at the prologue then I think this is interesting, why did he become a criminal?, why did he have to fight?, and there are many questions that I hope will be answered as this novel progresses.

10mth
Friska_Angel
Friska_AngelLv1

An honest review from me, I read it and found some errors in grammar but it's not that bad, because I've read worse than this so I can still enjoy and understand this story. Also the storyline is quite detailed and not too rushed, or too slow so I like it

10mth
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