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ClericxsLv156mth
2024-06-24 12:02

I have read about 150 chapters so far. I like the story and setting but honestly there needs to be someone editing the story for mistakes. And when he is looting, I wish the author would cut hot the repeating stuf and give us a one paragraph summary, like 20x walkers looted, 20 cores, 2,000 ML blood, 20x cores, 20x upgrade crystals. After the first zombie of each type you could easily shorten it to just loot and total experience. And then list any extra drops that are out of the norm. Also stop repeating things we already know if they have been mentioned in the last 100 chapters. I would also suggest the author reread their story and check for continuity errors to either fix them or find an in world reason to explain them. Over all I would recommend if you have patience.

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* cut out the repeating stuff

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