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Clericxs
ClericxsLv158mth
2024-06-24 12:02

I have read about 150 chapters so far. I like the story and setting but honestly there needs to be someone editing the story for mistakes. And when he is looting, I wish the author would cut hot the repeating stuf and give us a one paragraph summary, like 20x walkers looted, 20 cores, 2,000 ML blood, 20x cores, 20x upgrade crystals. After the first zombie of each type you could easily shorten it to just loot and total experience. And then list any extra drops that are out of the norm. Also stop repeating things we already know if they have been mentioned in the last 100 chapters. I would also suggest the author reread their story and check for continuity errors to either fix them or find an in world reason to explain them. Over all I would recommend if you have patience.

Global Awakening: Apocalypse Ender's Chronicle

xlntz
3.9
568 Chs

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Clericxs
ClericxsLv15

* cut out the repeating stuff

8mth
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xlntz
xlntzAuthor

A hundred chapters out, so I'm finally dropping a review. Hello! Author here! Thanks for checking out my novel, and I hope you enjoy reading it as much as I enjoy writing it. If you like an apocalypse-themed story that has other apocalypses involved, with system, AI, and regression(?), then you can give this one a try. If you have any questions about the story, you can also ask them in the comments.

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Captain_Spoiler
Captain_SpoilerLv13

Honest reviews are here.. If read the 1st a few chapters, it is amazing.. MC can choose an Apocalypse Type?? A.I. Rebellion, Alien Invasion, Demon Invasion, Dragon Awakening, Fairy Realm Collision, Magic War, Ragnarok and Zombie Outbreak.. This is awesome, I love these.. MC chose 1st one (A.I.), and BAM, System Error and Clear.. MC chose his 2nd choice (Fairy) and again, System Error and BAM, Clear again.. Then MC accidentally called the Apocalypse Option name his hate the most (Zombie) and poof.. Yeah, he is going there.. Basically, MC completed the 1st and 2nd Apocalypse Option, but he got no memory about them, he doesn't know anything.. Like nothing.. Apparently, MC himself (from 1st and 2nd Option) don't want to let MC true self (3rd Option) know.. They (MC from 1st and 2nd Option) ask MC to "End" the Apocalypse, not just to survive.. Bro, most novel MC has become Regressor or Reincarnator, and become super OP due to all the future knowledge, experience and information.. And in this novel, the author make him something like "Regressor" but no memory, no extra power gain from previous life Apocalypse Option, no experience, no clue, no information, and bla bla bla.. You seal his EVERYTHING, and you want him to do better?? Imagine the situation like this.. Michael Jordan has reached the peak of his time. Suddenly, his lost all his memories, he lose all his skills, techniques, and muscles he gained.. MJ needs to start from a very beginning with nothing.. But this time, he needed to become better than his old self.. You were like, there are easy ways, and your previous self wants to take the "hard way" instead.. So, this is weak to strong type of novel.. I don't read too far, but somehow, the more I read, the more I keep seeing how st*pid MC choice and decision making are.. The story is awesome at the beginning, but how can it turn into D*mb story.. Well, this novel is not for me, and maybe others like it.. Good luck..

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Naonoe
NaonoeLv2

It was a good intro, but decided to drop it after mc was frustrating with his chosen stupidity. Not surprised if it is intentional, but that "chinese" protagonist stupidity is not my cup of tea.

10mth
Kelvin_Sekwati
Kelvin_SekwatiLv12

great novel. very intriguing. the mc isn't stupid or forgetful but isn't unrealistically a calm cold blooded killer at least not in the beginning. the natural development of good mindset top tier đź‘Ź

1yr
ShinigamiNoInochi
ShinigamiNoInochiLv4

I was captivated by the book from the first page to the last. The author has a remarkable talent for writing, grammar, and storytelling. The plot was engaging, original, and full of twists and turns. The main character was complex, relatable, and memorable. I highly recommend this book to anyone who loves a good read.

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FluffyFabu
FluffyFabuLv14

Interisting story! The beginning is kinda flat and like usual, but after that it holds you and you want to read on and on, just to know what will happen next and is it following your imagination. It holds great potential and I hope it can live up to that.

1yr
KVCD13
KVCD13Lv4

I changed my mind when the author put a selfish dying survivor and of course it's a blonde woman. It's so unnecessary, at first the MC absolutely doesn't want to fight the zombies who are chasing the woman but when the woman died the MC IMMEDIATELY get excited on fighting the zombies. Absolutely dumb asf and pathetic. I'm so freaking disappointed, what a waste of time.

11mth
Zeustiak
ZeustiakLv15

This writing is rather amatuerish, and that is saying a lot given the novels on this app.

5mth
Patheror
PatherorLv13

if we were to compare books to foods it feels like fast food. story has interesting premise, but i often felt infuriated by authors/ mc logic/ choices.

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