At 28 chapters, the story is progressing well. It has interesting lore, and the MC has an ability that is different from a lot of the stories you read on here and it is currently being handled well, with a lot of potential. There’s also already the hint of romance, which I am happy to see. Hopefully, it won’t take forever for that to continue progressing. Hard to say right now since it is still early, but I’m happy with everything I’m seeing. There are the occasional mistakes in the grammar, but those have been minor and there are not very many. Keep up the good work Author!
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