Review Detail of Dawn_Lasagna in The Swordsmans Return with Mana

I think the world building has a lot of potential. I especially love the nuances to magic and aura in this novel. The characters are ok, but nother really new so far. Still, I'm not sure if I can keep reading much longer. For the love of all that is unholy, please get an editor or at least use grammarly or something to check your grammar and word usage. There are so many mistakes that it's hard to read. I have definitely seen worse, such as in mtl'd content, but it's still pretty bad.