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Tathagata_Bose
Tathagata_BoseLv110mth
2024-06-03 20:59

Yess, it is very intriguing and fascinating for me. For me, this novel currently is even better than Naruto the Wind Calamity(though it is also good). The small details, the gradual development or changes in character, the helplessness (but not in an edgy way) makes this very good. Also, yes the small and large details, the balance between the Pokemon world and realism; worldbuilding is I think, quite good till now(chapter 70). I just hope that Orion is not given a huge hack by which he can endlessly supply food materials for his pokemon, and thus can endlessly catch pokemons. In my opinion, he may have many pokemons but it should not be just that he can easily supply them food just by robbing the rich and people who are referred to as 'evil'. I don't have anything against it but I think it would be good if he has much helplessness(not in an edgy way).

Pokemon - The Timeless Journey

DemiGod_2972
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OllieZ
OllieZLv6

Thanks for writing the fic! Not revealing Rhyhorn's potential is one of the best decisions you made. In my opinion, Potential is the bane of real Pokemon bonding, as I will truly not care about Rhy if he was discovered trash from the start. I will still be disappointed if he really is Trash-tier, but now we would have already bonded with him. Potential makes Pokemon Pay to Win. Thankfully, If I understood right, they can still reach the top with resources, so I hope that it isn't that hard for a Trash Potential to become Medium (Silver) in potential, and that the higher potential are still possible for them, as it really will look like training Trash Potentntial into a waste of time. I still abhor those "realistic" weak-to-strong fics that give the MC trash potential after another, as they never reach that strong part. They drop the fic before it reaches, as they were too busy making the world darker and to make the MC suffer from it. My wish is for this to not turn into that. Anyways, as MC is already deemed special due his dilligence in Psychic training, and looks like he is going to be rewarded by it, I don't think this will be the case. I know you tagged #NoCheats, but Reincarnation and knowing the Pokemon setting is a Cheat on itself, and I hope you can abuse the knowledge all you possibly can.

1yr

Tsukuyomi777
Tsukuyomi777Lv4

A fantastic pokemon story 1 Things aren't handed to the MC on a silver platter 2 He is smart 3 The fanfic is realistic and explores more about the pokemon world 4 Over all writing quality and update speed is good 5 Bonus points for No Harem Though I had a few suggestions(my fovorites) for Pokemon like Garchomp its a good physical attacker can fight on land air and water Or Volcarona for ranged attacks

1yr
Cocoerloko
CocoerlokoLv3

I'm on chapter 18 and I must say that I'm liking where the story is going. So I'm going to give you 5 stars to encourage you. I hope you don't abandon the story, since most fanfic of Pokémon end up down.

1yr
StarSeekingEternal
StarSeekingEternalLv4

So far I am really enjoying the story. The story does a good job with the world being dangerous, realistic, and vast, which are the traits that I love to see in Pokémon fanfics. In addition the MC seems to be likeable, has a brain, and has self-awareness. I am eager to continue reading the story.

1yr
_leonid_
_leonid_Lv5

the only thing I can't stand in this ff is that Pokemons doesn't have names , like they're just characters and nothing more... why trainers don't gave names to them? !? it's strange

1yr
A_W_87
A_W_87Lv14

Reveal spoiler

1yr
Anderson_
Anderson_Lv4

you better keep making chapters as almost every Pokémon fanfiction of a similar type got dropped quick and this is good

1yr
Tonix
TonixLv1

All right, this novel is the best pokefic in Webnovel No drop please

1yr
Adolli
AdolliLv12

One of the best realistic Pokémon fanfics I have ever read, keep up the good work

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