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_Darker_Than_BlackLv139mth
2024-02-09 11:56

Plot is good, but progression is faster than light . It felt like a jumble of information here and there and the relationship progression(especially with his mom) is nonsensical. There are also various cliché plots, which I don't condemn, but expect something new.

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## * spoiler *##reaf if u don't eanna regret later by not reading later **** 1 star less for writing quality and another for character design . ..... .....the grammar is bad but readable and Lines are all Jumble mixing the or he .still readable . but so far not worth to unlocking privilege . Mc can only said to be villain 'cuz he is killing all heroines and protagonist . Except that he is cartoon "Incredible " that little kid with many powers......mc is not fighting destiny at all his luck is normal but he is getting everything Op .... Almost Everything is good about this but the protagonists and all heroines are easily killed by MC it's all one sided .I like Op MC but not a little kid all possible superpowers only for author to drop it when he run of ideas 💡 it's feel boring.Auth0r can make the heroines fight to protagonists to make it more enjoyable to read and engaging . ......mc is from a modern world where previously he didn't kill a single person develop such a murderous killing intent in 25 chap and start killing people in hundreds ... ....i grow up reading Chu Feng, lin feng ,ye Chen ,but they go through hardships for that killing intent but our mc didn't ........mc mindless whimsical killing won't give him a genuine character growth ,it looks like too fast change.here ain't looking macho it Chad he is looking like a kid with to much uncontrollable power to do things . otherwise this novel is more better in world n back ground development compare to author other works .since this wirld has more people other than mc n his women .but mc should bring the above changes i mention don't u author💬🤔

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