Review Detail of xscraid in Naruto: Subject #37

Ever seen two snails raced each other to boink a female snail at the finish line? That's the pace of this story, the snails be faster. Not badly written per say, other than few cringe dialogues but that's understandable considering MC trying to pass as a kid. But author god-damn! Snort some cocaine or something, I am about to fell to sleep with your pacing. Cocaine laced with Red Bull should help.