webnovel
Supreme_Lazy_Otaku
Supreme_Lazy_OtakuLv31yr
2024-01-21 09:56

The writing quality itself is pretty good, and the way you change the Douluo Dalu story is interesting, something that authors rarely do. But uhh the setting, especially the NTR part, I will have to give it 3/5 star. Don't get me wrong, the story is interesting, but uhh it is not my preference.

Perversion Doulou Dalu

just_a_potato_soul
3.6
47 Chs

Liked by 5 people

LIKE
empty img

No replies. Be the first!

Other Reviews
daniel_rahn
daniel_rahnLv2

mehh too bad, i love the concept of a world where s*x is normal and the mc start his lewd harem, but the fact there is netorare completly destroy all the interest i initially had, i mean maybe if you could promise us that eventually once mc make the heroines fall in love they will stop having casual s*x with others and focus on mc then that would be better, i would be willing to ignore the netorare mc might have since s*x is normal here and mc hasnt make the heroines fully fall in love with him. but unless this happen i dont think i will be able to read

1yr

Merlin58
Merlin58Lv2

+18 a douluo novel would be nice but netorare destroys everything, thank [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]god for not having such a sick fetish

1yr
The_Rune_Raven
The_Rune_RavenLv4

the second a bunch of people saw the netorare thing they instantly posted 1 star not reading past the point that the version of doulou mc is in has a culture that explains it away, not the biggest supporter of it myself but i'm fine with how the author is doing it as it's more of an open relationship then someone stealing women

1yr
Tasha_Williams_0673
Tasha_Williams_0673Lv1

All the cucks out giving 5 stars sigh! Adam 22 has surely become a role model for these guys, they all want to be like him. A new wave of cuckolds has emerged.

1yr
Beyond_
Beyond_Lv3

this shouldn't exist ,..,,.,..,.,.,,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,..,.,.,.,,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,..,,.,.,.,.,.,..,,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,..,.,.,,.,.,....,.,.,..,..,.,.,.,..

1yr
ArdaPendragon
ArdaPendragonLv4

Really? Bruh[img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]

1yr
Greenbeem1
Greenbeem1Lv14

Author should be on a watchlist ngl ☝️☝️☝️☝️

1yr
Rafael_Suassuna
Rafael_SuassunaLv1

Dude, you have incredible creativity, I love this fanfic, I hope it continues for a long time without any unforeseen events, both family and personal.

1yr
Ciphere
CiphereLv4

Im ranking it 5 stars to balance against naysayers the fic is more polyamory rather than ntr

1yr
Related Stories

HP: god of potions

This is the story of a soul reincarnated into the body of a first-year student attending Hogwarts, without any knowledge of the world(s) he's in. Follow his sleepless journey across the Harry Potter universe, where his single goal is to gather materials and become a god through his potion system. However, this isn't just any ordinary universe—it's an amalgamation of many. Join Gray Knight as he embarks on his quest to create the perfect potion, uncover who disrupted what should have been an easy journey, and evade the hunter chasing him. --- Warning! English isn't my first or second language, but I'll try to write something you can read and understand. This story revolves around potion-making and the search for ingredients. As a wise dwarf once said, alchemy is about gathering materials, so there will be monster fights and hunting. In fact, if you have an ingredient Gray needs, you're done for! As for romance, let me be honest—I don't know the Harry Potter universe very well. I've watched all the movies and am rewatching them while writing this fanfic, but I won't know obscure characters like Tonks. Who the hell is Tonks? I still don’t know! This makes romance tricky, but I'll try to find the most beautiful girl in this or other universes for Gray. Still, Gray’s first love will always be his gold coins. NO HAREM.

Bulale_Abali · Others
3.1
176 Chs

Overgeared: Transmigrated as a Super Named NPC but also as a Player.

The story about a super fan of the masterpiece Overgeared. He is just an ordinary person. No particular side back story nor have experienced a tragic life but somehow, woke up as an NPC in the novel. An NPC in the virtual world of legends, myths and the world of infinite adventures and possibilities. How can he survive in this kind of world? "It's fine. I had read until the part where the protagonist becomes an Absolute so I'm slightly confident about my knowledge in this world." With the wisdom of a die hard fan of the novel, he had the chance to grab the best advantages, especially... 「Notice: Orders have been received. Initializing on scanning 'Pagma's Rare Book'.」 Fortunately, luck was with him to give a cheat unique skill. The Great Sage! Within the world from the novel he adores and loves, Lexus will journey the entire world, and see of how high he can reach until he stands in the peak! The story consist of novel 'Overgeared' and some other stories. Disclaimer: I do not own the cover. (Source: Pinterest.) Disclaimer: Obviously I do not own Overgeared and any other materials in the fic. I am not a good author and this just my pure delusion so some might found this scringe.

Unleashed_Echo · Others
4.9
99 Chs

Trying to Survive in a World Full of FUTA’S!

A real Scumbag of a guy who wouldn’t mind hopping from one chick to another as it was more fun that way, gets killed by one of his Ex-Lovers. For this he is judged not by a god of reincarnation but a vindictive goddess of love who just so happen to have ended her relationship with her partner. And using him as a toy he is to her he gives him a suitable punishment for his crimes. “You wanted to have women left and right come to you huh? Well I hope you enjoy being in a world where only less than 1% of the population is males.” “…. How’s that a bad thing?” “Oh, it’s because the other 24% is females and the rest is FUTA’S! And to add bonus to your misery asshole I’m going to make you look like a cute little Femboy that all those hung Futa’s want to pound! So you better prepare your ass for the worst nightmare of your life!” And with that his nightmare truly begun, and if not for the slight intervention of another god our hero would have little to no chance for survival. With no system and no meta knowledge of this new world that seemed to have a mash up of original characters as well as those from various anime, video games and manga being still female or futafied our hero has only one goal. Survive this world and keep his anal virginity intact and maybe make the most of his time in his new life. ***** Now I’m going to say that this is going to be an extremely Niche type of novel that only certain people will like, you don’t like Futanari, which is women having both male and female genitalia then this isn’t for you, though I hope the title gave it away. There is no system, and besides a very small gift he got from a god he is basically left to his own devices in a completely different earth from his own. I know it says survival in the tags, but that ‘Survival’ is whether he can protect his ass or not, and no I’m not going to tell you if it happens or not as that would ruin a bit of the fun in writing this. Also he will be looking like Astolfo from Fate for his now current Femboy appearance that was bestowed upon him.

OneMoreScore · Others
4.9
96 Chs

Tower of God: Sequence Strength

What do you desire? Money and riches? Honor and Pride? Revenge? Or something that transcends all these? Whatever you desire... Is Here! The Tower of God welcomes you! ~~~ ~~~ In a sense, the Tower was a saving grace; a disgusting prank played on Winston Heath when he was suddenly transported to these strange lands. Now, climbing a tower where any wish could be granted so long until the top was reached, Winston yearns to find a purpose for himself. However, Irregulars have always brought changes to the tower! How will he fare? Especially when armed with the three pathways of the Lord of Mysteries?! ~~~ ~~~ Volume 1: Vistas of the Test Floor What terrifying sights lie beyond, and what whispers within the waves? In the endlessness of the tower, who could pass through the trials? Amidst the flowing waves of the divine water, who could achieve the unthinkable? On the floor of tests, dangers lurk both in the dark and in clear sight. ~~~ Volume 2: Hunter in the Waves Who lurks in the shadows and what peers from the mist? The dangers of the tower are many to name. When a Hunter sets the bait for the fish, the blood will attract sharks all the same. When bait is thrown into the sea of fate, the ripples are bound to bounce back. Amid the expansive tower, who can unravel the Mysteries? In the epicenter of conflict, who will come out on top?

Yesnth · Others
4.8
121 Chs
Login