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kirill_Boldyrev
kirill_BoldyrevLv12mth
2024-10-13 20:33

Фф хорош, но только в начале, дальше идет полный бред, по типу "я тут самый могущественный". Персонажи не раскрыты, та же Кушина получила силу на халяву и просто говорит, что она здесь могущественная, толком не участвуя в боях, из-за чего не имеет опыта. Но тупо из-за автора Кушину не втаптывают в грязь джонины, которые могли бы преподать ей урок. Из-за этого одно это уже нехило подбивает желание читать, но автор на этом не останавливается, делая ГГ тупо могущественней просто потому что. В Фф ни ГГ, ни другие персонажи не имеют раскрытия характера. Желание плюнуть в лицо ГГ возникает при его боях. Да, он правильно делает, что убивает, но при этом он показывает свои навыки и умения, демонстрируя свою неопытность. Поэтому Джонины могли искать лазейку в защите. Тут опять же мешает автор, чтобы ГГ не отлетел из-за своей тупости. И это только малые проблемы, но из-за них фф уже можно не читать дальше.

Naruto: Ōtsutsuki lineage

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3.4
124 Chs

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Sieg44
Sieg44Lv3

To be frank, it's bad, it could be very good if the only thing the system gives is the otsutsuki lineage, but it gives absurd and op things, from the 6th episode it already becomes an untouchable character. The translation is not bad but the story is garbage, classic Chinese ff, if I write ff without using my brain I can write better than 80% of Chinese ff

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theusual
theusualAuthor

Reveal spoiler

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Ole_Tessmann
Ole_TessmannLv4

Translation is pretty good. There’s some things that aren’t explained like he has a mark on his neck or whatever all of a sudden that wasn’t mentioned before. Since it’s a translation I can’t say much about the story itself and where it’s going, especially because it seems to be slow paced and I didn’t even read all the available chapters yet, but this is gonna be your typical Op mc story that gets various powers for no reason. He’s three years old, has an ancient or pure otsutsuki bloodline, a system that got him pika pika no mi with no weaknesses, observation Haki and rokushiki manual, tenseigan that can supposedly control space and time and it’s all being spoon-fed to him. He’s a branchmember but doesn’t have the seal, because he doesn’t have byakugan but his eyes are described as lavender(with golden colour)?? That’s pretty much how a byakugan looks, sometimes more white sometimes more creamy lavenderish no?! Idk there’s a lot of things not to like already but I don’t find many good naruto fanfictions to read nowadays so I’ll keep reading to kill time

4mth
Demonic_Dragon_01
Demonic_Dragon_01Lv14

What is the name of the original novel??????????

5mth
luiz_S
luiz_SLv1

Reveal spoiler

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Aleksic
AleksicLv12

The moment I read Chen! I ran as far as my webnovel legs could carry me Hyuga Chen 😂😂😂😂☕️☕️

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Trollface
TrollfaceLv1

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Ouroboros_00
Ouroboros_00Lv2

The ff is good don't have mistakes even though thw system is kinda sus and makes him overpowered quickly, i mean just give him otsusuki lineage but and some techniques , not the pika pika no mi and all the stuff, overall it's good for time pass

3mth
Maycon_Henrique_10
Maycon_Henrique_10Lv1

É raro encontrar boas histórias de Naruto do anime espero que continue postando mais capítulos já que sua história tira o tédio do dia é realmente muito boa 😁😁😁👍👍👍👍

4mth
Daoistf9kQIN
Daoistf9kQINLv4

Good novel 5 stars 🌟 🌟🌟🌟🌟...............

5mth
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