Review Detail of Raptor2244 in Naruto: Renewed Destiny(REWRITTEN VERSION IN MY PROFILE, PLEASE CHECK)
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Yo, I like the concept of this novel. Despite the fact that it’s been done before I think the idea that there is someone who is powerful to look out for naruto. If I had one huge complaint it’s the constant caps lock yelling. That’s really ugly in any novel. The MC also seems a little toothless because he just yells at the hokage repeating “HOW COULD YOU” and “HOW DARE YOU” over and over again. Also the fact that he didn’t return for kushina birth is sus. I can’t imagine minato not recalling his op brother to help. Anyways. This novel has potential, author just needs to practice his writing skills some more.
Naruto: Renewed Destiny(REWRITTEN VERSION IN MY PROFILE, PLEASE CHECK)
Zal01
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Raptor2244:It is much MUCH better than your first attempt. League of difference imo. Waiting for more chapters to see how he handles danzo and the council. He was a little soft on hiruzen imo but I’m sure he has a reason and hiruzen still has his uses. 👍
Zal01:Hey brother. I have republished the book. Everything will be the same, but I'll have 15 to 16 new chapters in the beginning, just to make it more captivating. Looking forward to seeing u there. Check my profile, and my books, and you'll c Naruto:Renewed Destinyimage
It is much MUCH better than your first attempt. League of difference imo. Waiting for more chapters to see how he handles danzo and the council. He was a little soft on hiruzen imo but I’m sure he has a reason and hiruzen still has his uses. 👍
Zal01:It's named Naruto Renewed: Namikaze's Resurgence 👍