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BooksForLifeBeyondLv410mth
2024-02-26 15:53

novels okay the reason for the low reviews in story development, background and character designs is because of 2 reasons first the novel is just starting to shape up second this SEEMS to some sort rezero type regression but given to a mentally unstable teenager meaning this novel will be going in circles for a bit save for the inner monologues and slight changes and as for the question from the synopsis the real question is do you want an optimistic answer or a realistic answer if you choose an optimistic answer you would find near infinite different answers if you choose a realistic answer it would be variations of the same answer there is no original reason or meaning for it save for the ones we make for ourselves.

RE: starting my life in the another world is the only way?

WhereIsHumanity
4.2
153 Chs

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WhereIsHumanity
WhereIsHumanityAuthor

thanks for the review. Yeah, I am aware of the two things you mentioned, in the first 30+ chapters. i will make this better for charakter design. but for the background, i will make it slow.

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WhereIsHumanity
WhereIsHumanityAuthor

Hello, I'm the author of this novel. You can directly interact with me here if you want to ask or criticize something. I also want to applaud you who persevering through the first few chapters, which were a bit... aaahhh... you know...

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Novel_Guru
Novel_GuruLv4

liked it, nice work author, although for me to truly enjoy this work atleast 80-100 chaps are needed cause of slow development.

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Aspecto
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Honestly this is so terribly written. The character design, writing quality and overall plot development is trash. I wouldn't recommend this [img=faceslap]

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Bocchi_thegoat
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This is good, it's just that the story focus is slow and sometimes boring. and also this is a fantasy genre, but the content is very different from other fantasy genre novels. I feel cheated, so I can't give a 5 star review

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Andrew_3555
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Reveal spoiler

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Sn1z
Sn1zLv14

I give this a low score just because it got to emo for me like it was fine for awhile, the mc being a regular lobar in a class but it immediately went to “staring at the darkness” and that just ruined my immersion, but besides that it was a good start idk abt the rest

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DaoistUU3J24
DaoistUU3J24Lv3

Please don’t give up on this novel it’s great the writing quality is soooo sweet i just cloud not stop myself from reading It all day if i have compling it will be that one of the chapters tilte spoler the whole ‘Mystery diseases’ given the disease full name on chapter titles....

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PurpleGenius
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Is this novel competing in WSA 2024? Please reply.

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TeLLer_taLes
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Good job author, please keep going, you can definitely do better. On that note, you guys should check out my book 'My perfect demon'. You will definitely find it appealing.

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