Item: Longevity, starting from being a chicken raising servant
Rating: 3.8
Author: DaoistyfpBEy

DaoistyfpBEyLv157mth

2024-09-06 10:18

Sorry, it seems like the author has a lot of good ideas. It’s just with the system. There’s so many obvious thoughts of tryout and he doesn’t seem to go down probably for the purpose of keeping the store that he already has in his mind, which is not always the best. It doesn’t feel like the story has flexibility the story A little too obvious that this is the first novel, the authors done don’t get me wrong. I think the author has good talent and potential. I hope he keeps going forward and improving . It’s just the story isn’t for me.

Longevity, starting from being a chicken raising servant

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