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2024-04-10 19:57

what i hate is mc is smart. yet he let himself use by bimbo knowing he got nothing in return. he should just cut off from the girl after the threat.

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TLDR: Maybe it's a good book.Maybe it isn't the author wants to Piggy. Back off of Harry Potter and describes the first technique, the main character gets as being directly from the Harry Potter world and the authors on words.And that just took me out of any interest that the story might have had. I was willing to give this book an honest try. But I just can't bother to read a piece of work when the author just blatantly uses other books for his novel. And I don't mean take a few ideas musically. I'm literally says in the book. The Harry Potter world and other things like that. Talking about the techniques, the character gets another stuff and honestly it just makes it so uninteresting to read at that point, even if it's an adequate description for something. It completely takes me out of the mood to read it when the author who's writing a fictional story needs to base it off of another fictional story. Maybe that's not the best way to put it, but honestly. Just the Reliance on Harry Potter, slang and the way the system works along within the main character, referencing Harry Potter all the time, it made it so I couldn't keep reading. Obviously. I'm exaggerating with all the time. But you know, I really didn't make it to chapter 3 because it got so uninteresting right? After I saw the author described the mind obscuring technique as from the Harry Potter world that I had 0 interest. Keep reading. I tried to finish the chapter and I couldn't because there was just no intro. That's in the story from that point on. Because at that point this is just gonna be a fan fiction from Harry Potter. And someone can tell me that they've read. The chapter 800 and it's a very different story than Harry Potter. And I wouldn't care because first impressions matter a lot. And this novel went from something that sounded kind of interesting with a weird character's name like link to I can't even bother to read this because if he's a Chinese author referencing Harry Potter techniques and other things like that for his wizards. It makes me wonder if the name link is connected to Nintendo's link from high rule.But I digress in the end.I couldn't even get past the third chapter because there was no interest on continuing the read.

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