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BlockshotLv153mth
2024-08-19 01:20

The story has been great so far (currently on chapter 608) it’s nice seeing a story where it isn’t only the main character that’s growing throughout the story, but rather his entire family, and those that he is friends with, or allies with. The story does a pretty good job at developing certain other characters by not always focusing only on the MC, but also others. The only real negative i have about the story is that sometimes the translation can be slightly off, like mixing up “he” and “she” and also changing the names of different cultivation levels sometimes, like “Great Saint” being referred to as “Saint” a lot of the time, which can be confusing since Saint is a level below Great Saint. But other than that the story has been really good.

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Also to add, it’s somewhat understandable given how massive the main characters family is later in the story, but some characters that aren’t as relevant are casted aside.

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Translation quality- The translation quality is quite good but there are some problems with the name for realms switching for a few chapters and the fact that some characters are not properly gendered as the translation switches from she to he. Even so, it is understandable and doesn’t majorly disrupt the reading experience. Updating Stability-The author posts at least a chapter a day and is consistent. Story Development-The novel has a lot of time skips and focuses more on the development of the clan rather than the adventures of the main character. I think it’s quite good as it shows what’s going on and leads properly into time skips. It also makes it more realistic. I do wish that there was more time spent on characters but that is likely a result of the rapid movement of the clan. Overall, very good if you can handle frequent time skips and a focus on wholistic story development. Character Design- The characters are quite good in having some uniqueness and differences but we really don’t get enough time with them to be able to tell how deep they truly are. World Background- The world is designed and portrayed well with a focus on sects and regions of power. The view of the world changes as the clan grows stronger and moves to more challenging areas. Same with this, I would like more time spent on diving into the depths of each area. Even so, each area is unique and has the main character unlocking new and unique things. Overall, don’t expect a masterpiece in character design and worldbuilding, but also realize that the world is very good for what we see of it and that there is still time for the novel to slow down and focus on characters or places. Just be prepared for rapid change. I hope you enjoyed my review. 😁

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